查看完整版本: 今夜我将要离开去远方

今夜我将要离开去远方

[color=blue]轻轻的靠近你
玫瑰吐着夜色的迷离
梦的屋檐下
我把星星留在窗边
等你醒来时摘下
傻傻的恋了你这么久
还来不及说爱你
就要在今夜分离
那么近 那么远

夜风轻轻的把我带走
我卷起夜色还有你的美
化一颗星辰
落一片湖畔
在与你最近最远的地方
和你的倒影相互依偎
只到时间停止呼吸

夜
静悄悄

夜风
无声又无息[/color]

晓雅难得一见，红心问好！
依旧情意绵绵……

第一段的感觉实在是跳跃得太多了,没尝出韵味...

终于有一篇读出了诗的感觉，好久没有见到这样精彩的作品了。红心送上

最近我写了俩萍踪的，看来素一对了，浪迹天涯的主儿……:lol:

星光里
我摒住呼吸
小心的倾吐着 这难以开化的心绪

月夜 如是静柔
若檐下雨滴
无声地飘凌落里

风起又息间
我又再次清醒的 感知了那段梦境
依是如此醇香印真 给人心海驰骋

一丝涟漪微起的画面
也仿似我那 思海的一抹轻绪
浅浅的不忍 触及..


拜君文 随笔而洒
无有不恭 望楼主正解间！

6度红心挺献 赞誉里！

[[i] 本帖最后由 fgxt520 于 2011-9-3 02:37 编辑 [/i]]

文与其名,悠雅而又充满感情,让天涯读到如此清新的作品,红心:coffe !

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